Selfie Writing

Success criteria

Use a variety of sentence beginnings

Use punctuation

Add adjectives and verbs

Use a variety of sentence lengths   

To help you:

Use the GREEN Edingly pyramid

Dictionary/Thesaurus to search for WOW words

I am trying to make my writing more exciting for the reader by varying ny sentence beginnings and using descriptive language.

 

Wait! How did I get here. It's the White house, I am so happy. It’s sunny and beautiful here, but I am concerned about how I got here. The sun is so bright causing a very hot day. I want to meet the President of the United States of America. I reckon I could run around the White house about 2 times with excitement.