100 Word Story!

Success criteria

Use a variety of sentence beginnings

Use punctuation

Add adjectives and verbs

Use a variety of sentence lengths   

To help you:

Use the GREEN Edingly pyramid

Dictionary/Thesaurus to search for WOW words

I am trying to make my writing more exciting for the reader by varying my sentence beginnings and using descriptive language.

Words that are used in writing:

Orange- Orange

Wide -Blue

Crocodile- Green

Within- Yellow

Collapsed- Pink

The Door!

The wide door was right in front of me it was orange with a silver handle. I opened it and saw a lot of crocodiles swimming in some water, but there was one crocodile, and that crocodile was jumping off a trampoline into the water causing a big huge splash. Tick Tock went the crocodile, I ran screaming towards the orange door. There was only one problem the door was gone. What could have happened, I looked down and saw the door pieces on the floor. Suddenly I realised it must have collapsed. Within a moment I blacked out. Suddenly I woke up in a hospital.