Thursday, 7 September 2017

Character Description

Character Description

Name: Sachin (My Brother)

My brother Sachin has cool straight and curly hair. He has greenish blue eyes which are really cool. He is sporty and loves playing rugby. Also every night at 8:00 to 8:30 he plays Roblox (an online gaming platform) on the computer. He is also very smart and good at spelling. He is also very fast, he made it into Regionals for Cross Country. One of the best things is that he is very funny and mostly makes me laugh by pulling funny faces. My brother also loves pasta, his favourite is probably Penne Pasta.
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Wednesday, 6 September 2017

Speech Writing

Dogs are better than Cats.


I think dogs are better than cats and here are my reasons why I think that. By the way, people who love cats, there’s no need to worry because there are probably heaps of reasons on the internet why cats are better than dogs.


Dogs can easily be trained far better than cats. For example, you can easily teach dogs not to run away or even get the newspaper for you in the morning or whenever it is delivered. Some people can even teach them to do tricks, while cats will just sit there staring at you not wanting to do anything.


Another reason why dogs are far better than cats is because dogs could protect your house or you from strangers/burglars. For example, if someone you don’t know or someone is trying to steal something or trying to hurt someone, the dog will get in the intruders way and will bark at them to make them scared and for them to run away.  If necessary might even bite the intruder or attack them. If an intruder comes in and there is a cat sitting on the floor or on the couch it would ever stare at them and probably purr or not care about what they are doing, or even run away.


My third reason is that dog’s help you keep fit. Dogs normally want walks so they would beg you to take them for a walk and if you don’t they would probably start annoying you. Plus if you need to go down to the dairy or the supermarket or somewhere you need to go, you could walk the dog, if the place you need to go isn’t so far, so you wouldn’t have to drive the car and damage the environment by gas and fuel coming from the car. Normally cats would just sit down and not want to do anything except hide and adventure.


Dogs care about you. If you are down in the dumps or sad they will help cheer you up. For example, if you are having a rest because you are super sad they might come and jump up on your bed and lie next to you because they care about you. Cats, they really only care about getting fed and would probably jump on the end of your bed for a rest.


Finally I think dog’s help people. Dog’s help people a lot especially blind people. These dogs are called guide dogs, they are specially trained dog’s to help people get around when they are blind. Also they help people on farms, like rounding up sheep and all that. Dog’s also help sniff out things or people for the police.

So in conclusion, they are all my reasons on why I think dog’s are better than cats. But then if you are a cat lover, there’s probably heaps of websites about how cats are better than dogs so don’t worry.

Sick Sentences

Sick sentences


The waves hit the ship: The crashing, splashing waves crash into the ship, causing a deafening snap.


It was a cold day: The icy cold water caused shivers all over the whales causing a very icy freezing cold day.
Sam and the skydivers held on to each other. They were high up. It was scary: Frightened, Sam and the other frightened skydivers gripped as tightly as possible onto each others hands. They were the highest they would ever go in the sky. They were very scared.  
The rider held on. His bike was going quickly over the ground. It was really dusty. He felt excited and scared: The frightened rider tightly gripped his handlebars. His big bike was zooming down the hill. The air was extremely dusty. The rider felt excited but also felt frightened.

Tuesday, 6 June 2017

Hero Popplet!


This is what a hero is to me and some heroes in my life!

Certificate For Maths Test Website!


Here is my results on the maths test website! I got 97%! I forgot to add a 3 in front of a 94.


Wednesday, 31 May 2017

Selfie Writing

Success criteria
Use a variety of sentence beginnings
Use punctuation
Add adjectives and verbs
Use a variety of sentence lengths   
To help you:
Use the GREEN Edingly pyramid
Dictionary/Thesaurus to search for WOW words

I am trying to make my writing more exciting for the reader by varying ny sentence beginnings and using descriptive language.
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Wait! How did I get here. It's the White house, I am so happy. It’s sunny and beautiful here, but I am concerned about how I got here. The sun is so bright causing a very hot day. I want to meet the President of the United States of America. I reckon I could run around the White house about 2 times with excitement.

100 Word Story!

Success criteria
Use a variety of sentence beginnings
Use punctuation
Add adjectives and verbs
Use a variety of sentence lengths   
To help you:
Use the GREEN Edingly pyramid
Dictionary/Thesaurus to search for WOW words

I am trying to make my writing more exciting for the reader by varying my sentence beginnings and using descriptive language.

Words that are used in writing:
Orange- Orange
Wide -Blue
Crocodile- Green
Within- Yellow
Collapsed- Pink

The Door!

The wide door was right in front of me it was orange with a silver handle. I opened it and saw a lot of crocodiles swimming in some water, but there was one crocodile, and that crocodile was jumping off a trampoline into the water causing a big huge splash. Tick Tock went the crocodile, I ran screaming towards the orange door. There was only one problem the door was gone. What could have happened, I looked down and saw the door pieces on the floor. Suddenly I realised it must have collapsed. Within a moment I blacked out. Suddenly I woke up in a hospital.